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Ah, the sound of rain,
  calls in the night,
Rising and falling in urgency,
A whisper
  not more than breath on the wind,
Then deafening roar,
Fickle and violent,
Then why so lovely and loved?

Time would chide lovers
That passions in the rain are but fevers,
   phantoms burning in the night air-
Tiresome words to those who would live
  and let damned the dawning of day
When such phantoms may burn out in the morning lights.

Sleep filled houses,
Empty cars sleeping under watchful halogens,
All islands amid lakes
  and oceans on the sidewalk.
Fall again like chapel bells,
  and float into my hands
While I walk through the river lands,
And listen to the song of tide,
Pitter pat,
   pitter pat.
  
©2004-2009 ~neverlovedsoul
:iconneverlovedsoul:

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Written in the beautiful month of May a little after midnight while listening to the rain outside the window of Diana's house. The trees and the rain became lovers, and dreams became reality.

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:iconsilversteelwolf:
I like the parallels between nature and lovers. Good work!
:iconneverlovedsoul:
My thanks again friend.
It was just such a beautiful night I couldn't pass up the opportunity
to work with the raw beauty I had outside my window.

Namaste'
~Emmanuel
:icontheoceanschild:
wow. I know it's rather frowned upon to simply say this, but i'm going to say it - this is simply beautiful. The rain just has a way of making everything seem alright again, even if it's storming i think. rain makes me cry tho....that's weird i know....anyways, I really love this poem, though. I love "All islands amid lakes
and oceans on the sidewalk." the very very most, it's an awesome contrast, so I have to applaud you on that.
:iconneverlovedsoul:
I really appreciate the comment. I'm glad you liked that particular part of the poem, it took me forever and a day to figure out the wording on it and nearby. Thank you again,

Namaste'
~Emmanuel
:icon2le:
Wow this is very beautiful. Well done.

--
Hungry? Grab a snicker. Do it...do it!
:iconneverlovedsoul:
My thanks as always,
~Emmanuel

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